Okay, meine erste Fanfiction, ich hoffe sie ist in Ordnung...
Die Idee kam mir, als ich mit einem Pflaster am Finger auf dem Sofa saß. xD Und sie ist auf Englisch, weil mir die ersten Ideen auch auf Englisch kamen und ich einige Formulierungen auf Deutsch einfach nicht so schön finde. ^__^
Das Ende ist irgendwie ziemlich plötzlich, aber ich weiß nicht, wie ich das sonst schreiben soll... D: Werds vielleicht noch ändern. :D
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Erstellt: 25.02.2011
Letzte Änderung: 25.02.2011
Letzte Änderung: 25.02.2011
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Hauptcharaktere: England / Arthur Kirkland, Japan
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kommentare (3) 1922 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Curry
Von: Britty Serie: Hetalia - Axis Powers Stil: Computer Grafik, Computer koloriert
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (3)
Das war so süß
Danke, das freut mich! *w*
Ha ha, it's so strange reading AsaKiku from someone who ''is'' actually England.. /'D Um, sorry.
YEAH for English! More YEAH for British English! (it's metres, not meters! >v<)
I had much fun reading this, the characters are acting so cute, I really enjoyed it. The only thing that bothered me a bit were the few spelling mistakes I noticed, but there are really just a few, so I won't mind.
I have read a huge big-ass amount of English fanfictions, but yours was somehow different from those I've read on FF.net. :/ I don't know, it may be that the authors there are native English speakers and know better how to use their language than someone who just learnt English at school or something. Well, what I wanted to say is, that reading this felt a bit ''straight-lined''. Maybe a few more adjectives and common English phrases would lighten the mood up a bit? Ha ha, but what do I know, I've never written fanfiction in English, just read them. /slaps self
Anywayyy.
Please keep writing, the world needs more AsaKiku °^° (but everything different from that would also be appreciated /D)
I am sorry for writing in English as well, I just.. kind of felt like it. Ahaha.. /is shot again
YEAH for English! More YEAH for British English! (it's metres, not meters! >v<)
I had much fun reading this, the characters are acting so cute, I really enjoyed it. The only thing that bothered me a bit were the few spelling mistakes I noticed, but there are really just a few, so I won't mind.
I have read a huge big-ass amount of English fanfictions, but yours was somehow different from those I've read on FF.net. :/ I don't know, it may be that the authors there are native English speakers and know better how to use their language than someone who just learnt English at school or something. Well, what I wanted to say is, that reading this felt a bit ''straight-lined''. Maybe a few more adjectives and common English phrases would lighten the mood up a bit? Ha ha, but what do I know, I've never written fanfiction in English, just read them. /slaps self
Anywayyy.
Please keep writing, the world needs more AsaKiku °^° (but everything different from that would also be appreciated /D)
I am sorry for writing in English as well, I just.. kind of felt like it. Ahaha.. /is shot again
That was just ... brilliant~ *w*
I laughed so hard when Kiku collapsed on the floor xDDD
I was so sure that Arthurs Curry would turn out to be good this time x3
But I kinda liked that it wasn't in the end~
That was a great surprise and really funny <D
Kikus thought that you do not need to change your cooking and that there are other possibilities to change your life fitted.
And the kiss was really cute, although it was a bit surpising~
But really adorable nevertheless <33
I do approve~
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I just felt to write this comment in english, I'm sorry x3
I laughed so hard when Kiku collapsed on the floor xDDD
I was so sure that Arthurs Curry would turn out to be good this time x3
But I kinda liked that it wasn't in the end~
That was a great surprise and really funny <D
Kikus thought that you do not need to change your cooking and that there are other possibilities to change your life fitted.
And the kiss was really cute, although it was a bit surpising~
But really adorable nevertheless <33
I do approve~
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I just felt to write this comment in english, I'm sorry x3
