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Ano sa, my first englisch 100-word-drabble which i wrote for ren_no_jutsu from Live Journal, I decided also to post it here ^^~ (auch wenn es ein ziemlich bescheidenes englisch ist XD) Ich hoffe es gefällt *-*
 

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I put my arm around your waist and pull you nearer to me. Feel your breath on my skin, feel your body close to mine. Nearer I've ever expected it would. Your eyes look at me in a way, just telling me that you want to kill me.
 

But you won't do that.
 

You try to defend, try to get out of my grip. Why don't you do it? Every second you are able to get up, I hold your wrist but not that hard that it wouldn't allow you to just end up all this. You just could get up and do what you wanted to do in your whole live, killing me.
 

But you didn't. You want to lose, don't you? You need and want this.
 

My Lips stripe yours, I feel your breath getting faster. Your defense slow down.

I lick 'bout my lips before kissing you again. Much deeper with much more longing.

You return the kiss, a lightly smile get on my lips. At the moment you returned my kiss, you recognize what I knew from the beginning: you loose against me, my little brother.



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Bitte keine Beleidigungen oder Flames! Falls Ihr Kritik habt, formuliert sie bitte konstruktiv.
Von: abgemeldet
2004-03-04T07:06:45+00:00 04.03.2004 08:06
Guuut geschrieben ^^y und klasse ist die "Analyse" von Ita, das Sasu verlieren "will" *GG*
Von: abgemeldet
2004-01-20T21:12:55+00:00 20.01.2004 22:12
XD
Du hättest net ankündigen dürfen, dass es ItaSasu is!
Aber die gefällt mir X3 *lechtz*
Von: abgemeldet
2004-01-20T13:10:42+00:00 20.01.2004 14:10
Yo~! XD
Wie gesagt, großes Lob für deine neue, tolle, poetische FanFic! *handschüttel*
Das Ende is toll! *nodnod*
*weghusch*


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