A bad dream of me
Erstellt: 24.12.2003
Letzte Änderung: 24.12.2003
Letzte Änderung: 24.12.2003
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Englisch
99 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
99 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Eigene Serie
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 24.12.2003 U: 24.12.2003 |
Kommentare (6) 101 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Von: abgemeldet
2007-01-09T19:21:39+00:00
09.01.2007 20:21
its a really nice poem ^.^
but may be you could describe a little bit mose of the feelings. why it is hot? i havent understand that...
but may be you could describe a little bit mose of the feelings. why it is hot? i havent understand that...
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Von: abgemeldet
2006-07-05T19:44:11+00:00
05.07.2006 21:44
wow schön!
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Von: abgemeldet
2004-04-09T20:33:40+00:00
09.04.2004 22:33
oooh I'm sorry....
this is Swetha not pan_chan_achu!!!
I just logged in with my bro's nick...*accidently v.v"""*
this is Swetha not pan_chan_achu!!!
I just logged in with my bro's nick...*accidently v.v"""*
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Von: abgemeldet
2004-04-09T20:32:43+00:00
09.04.2004 22:32
Hi Yuma^^
I've just found ur poem now^^V Good job^^
I love the rhymes throughout the whole poem^^V
In my opinion it would have sounded better if you had written something else instead "say to myself"...That sounds pretty German^^""
"convinced myself" or "and figured..."...well, I'm not a artist^^" I just think..it sounds a lil weird...
Anyway, good job^^
Swetha
P.S: I would appreciate if you read my one and only poem, too....^^"
I've just found ur poem now^^V Good job^^
I love the rhymes throughout the whole poem^^V
In my opinion it would have sounded better if you had written something else instead "say to myself"...That sounds pretty German^^""
"convinced myself" or "and figured..."...well, I'm not a artist^^" I just think..it sounds a lil weird...
Anyway, good job^^
Swetha
P.S: I would appreciate if you read my one and only poem, too....^^"
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Von: abgemeldet
2004-02-19T16:03:13+00:00
19.02.2004 17:03
i dont know if u just wrote in english or if u re a native english speaker, so i ll speak in english. in u re describtion u said, that ur story is prosa, but it isnt prosa it s lyrik...i just wanted to that but the poem is nice
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Von: abgemeldet
2004-01-18T17:27:57+00:00
18.01.2004 18:27
what a wunderfull poem *smile*
i love it.
have you written more of this poem's?
your
mel
i love it.
have you written more of this poem's?
your
mel
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