The dagger of the wizard

I wrote a new story.
It's similar to this one:
http://ju-chan09.deviantart.com/art/The-story-of-our-lives-368224890?q=gallery%3AJu-chan09%2F42262075&qo=6
actually Ala and J and one and the same person and the dream/wish in both stories is the same.

I wanted to write this story like a children's story.
But of course the content is ...
well, I guess you have to read it, to see for yourself.

I know my writing skills aren't the best, but I hope I could bring across my feelings with this story, even though.