It felt strange to be here with them today. After all she had done, they still trusted her.
What other choice did they have? Their parents were either dead or out there, roaming the city for some ADAM, their faces deformed. They wouldn't recognize them, anyway. No, none of those little girls would ever see their parents again. She had to take care of them now. It was the least she could do.
Castle of Glass
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 30.08.2013
Letzte Änderung: 31.08.2013
Letzte Änderung: 31.08.2013
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769 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
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Hauptcharaktere: Brigid Tenenbaum, Little Sister
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So emotional and full of childlike innocence it made my heart bleed for them and warmed it at the same time. Your english and style of writing are both so palatable. Although I'm outright unacquainted with BioShock I become rather fond of this little piece of work.
If your have some time a hand; perhaps I could arouse your interest with a OUaT-FF of mine* misplaced plug^^ Constructive criticism is highly welcome!
Best regards!
If your have some time a hand; perhaps I could arouse your interest with a OUaT-FF of mine* misplaced plug^^ Constructive criticism is highly welcome!
Best regards!
