Remedy
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 08.11.2010
Letzte Änderung: 15.12.2010
Letzte Änderung: 15.12.2010
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Englisch
1486 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
1486 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Eigene Serie
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Kapitel 1 Remnants Of Happiness | E: 08.11.2010 U: 15.12.2010 |
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Nice story, although I don't quite get the plot of this chapter.
Ember seems both caring and mad, but I think I like her ^^
and the boy, what's his name?
I really wish you'd make some character descriptions and maybe a little teaser about the plot, but I don't mind either way ;D
There were a few improper words and some grammar confusion but to hell with that ;D
Anyway, you think you'll manage to write the next chapter? I'll be reading then ;D
luv ya, Anni-sama <3
Ember seems both caring and mad, but I think I like her ^^
and the boy, what's his name?
I really wish you'd make some character descriptions and maybe a little teaser about the plot, but I don't mind either way ;D
There were a few improper words and some grammar confusion but to hell with that ;D
Anyway, you think you'll manage to write the next chapter? I'll be reading then ;D
luv ya, Anni-sama <3
