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Hey you,
I just read your poem (or whatever else it is...I think it sounds like a poem^^)and I thought it would be nice to say hi and tell you I really liked it. You make it easy for the reader to feel with whoever is speaking in the poem (wheter it's you yourself or a fictional person, I don't know), but the problem is, there is something remarkable missing in the text...you know, something that makes you think about it and remember it for a long time? Maybe that's just me, and others can find that special something, anyway, I hope I didn't insult you. I'm just being honest. Also, it kinda inteerupts one's reading when suddenly there is a line much much longer that the others. That may be intentional and even helpful in some poems, but I think in this one it's just kind of...disturbing. Again, this is just a subjective opinion, of course.
Anyway, I still liked it and I hope others will, too,
Good luck with anything you may try to write at the moment,
Masuyo =)