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The Bet

Or such a thing called Love
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Ryo-chan and Yamapi bet that one of them will win Tegoshi's heart, both confident that they will win. So a rancorous fight begins, in which both use even the worst methods to better each other, not knowing, that Tegoshi, who stands between them, slowly sinks into despair because of his confused heart....

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Auf Anfrage würde ich auch eine deutsche Übersetzung hochladen

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Vielleicht kennt jemand mein Liebling "The bet" auch von meinem Livejournal :D obwohl ich dort fast am Ende mit Hochladen bin xDD

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Von:  Jani-chan
2010-07-11T21:11:38+00:00 11.07.2010 23:11
“I’m going to ask somebody for something against fever, okay? Don’t move, I’ll be right back.” [don't move just don't. And don't breath. Don't you dare breathing. Don't leave the room, don't go partying and under any circumstances don't play hide and seek now. Understand me?]

“I’m hungry.” [kawaii -^.^- and when that's his only problem, they don't have to worry anymore]

quit NEWS? no! but well, I guess, I can understand him. And for him it would not be the worst choice...
Von:  Jani-chan
2010-07-11T20:57:13+00:00 11.07.2010 22:57
They met up at the station at 9pm. Ryo and Massu where first, after a while Koyama and Shige arrived. Yamapi and Shige came last. [Uhhh, two Shige. Where is Tego?]

They waite(t)[d] outside...

With a sad sigh he sat down at the bet [auf dem Wetteinsatz?] and waited in impatience.
[Warum? (meine Komilitonin: weil er bei der wette als sklave verstiegert werden soll und hat schon resigniert - das "at" ist hier zeitlich, nicht räumlich gemeint, natürlich. *g*]

Ryo looked at him with his special gaze. This special gaze, which made Tegoshi’s heart go crazy, his knees weak and wobbly and his mind blank. That moment Tegoshi knew that he felt more for Ryo than he’d thought. Maybe too much. Could you be too much in love with a person when there’s already another one important to your heart? Was it possible for one person to love more than one human so much it hurts? Could you die from the pain a confused heart causes?
Tegoshi’s heart hurt so much. And his head knew it was wrong. It was wrong to have such feelings for more than one person. Stupid heart. Didn’t it know that something like this was forbidden?
[I love the way you choose your words. It's just unbelievable touching...]

[Owwwwww, poor Tego. Beeing in love with two is the worst...there's always someone beeing hurt by somebody...]

“Yu-chan…” Ryo’s husky voice echoed in Tegoshi’s ear. “There’s no need to. Forget him. Forget everything about him. I wouldn’t be here four you if I wouldn’t think of you as one of the most wonderful persons I know.”
[bad, bad Ryo. How dare he...grrrrrrr. (^.^)]

Gently he stroke Tegoshi’s cold cheeks again. The tou(g)[c]h made Tegoshi come back to talk again.

Von:  Jani-chan
2010-07-11T20:23:41+00:00 11.07.2010 22:23
This time Tegoshi sat in the front row with the pretence to chat with Massu and Shige, so Kei-chan ended up in the middle between Ryo and Yamapi. [Oh, poor Kei-chan...]

“Oh, Pi-chan.”, he sighed and didn’t know what else to say. He just let down his fingers from Yamapi’s cheek and gently grabbed whose hand.
“Are you mad at me?”
Tegoshi shook his head, a little smile on his lips. He heard Yamapi breathe out in relief. They stayed like this, nobody made a movement, until Shige came back. And when he finally again said down between them, Yamapi could see that Tegoshi bit his lip with a cute smile and looked at his hands, as if he couldn’t believe they were holding Yamapi’s ones. And Yamapi got the feeling that he had scored a tiny point back to his side. [AWWWWWWW!]

Oosaka!Ōsaka!Ôsaka!Pleeeeease!

Tegoshi curiously looked at him. “Did you plan this?”
“I though of doing this last night, but I didn’t know if I would really try it, nor that it would work.”
“You’re far more evil than I thought.” Tegoshi laughed jokingly. Yamapi’s sudden serious face made him shut up.
“You don’t even know rudimentary how evil I really am.”
Silence. A sheepishly Tegoshi. And then Yamapi burst out into laughter. “You’re face is prizeless!” He chuckled and the tousled through Tegoshi’s hair with a peaceful smile. “Don’t look so scared. I swear, I’m the nicest person you know. At least I’m the nicest when it comes to you.” He poked Tegoshi’s blushed nose gently.
[Yamapi is evil! Hehe -^.^-]

Just when Tegoshi wondered whether they would start to talk some time, Yamapi screamed and jumped, let go of his hand and hopped away. Tegoshi stood there, blinking in surprise and stared at the empty space in front of him where Yamapi has been just a second ago.
“Woah, Bloody Mary’s Shit!! Look at this!”
Tegoshi turned around and found Yamapi standing in front of a candy-shop. “Cotton Candy!!” he shouted with shining, twinkling eyes and a bright childish smile. “I love it!”
Tegoshi chuckled. He has never seen Yamapi so happy before.
[KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Kawaii!!!!! *excited fangirlrumhopping*]

“Mh-mh.” Tegoshi shook his head. “I just wanted to see your smiling face.” He blushed a bit and took a huge bite from his own fluffy cotton candy.” “Mmmh~ Delicious~”
Yamapi had to laugh. “Wait a moment, you have…” Gently he wiped a away some of the cotton candy on Tegoshi’s cheeks it off his fingers. Tegoshi blushed again. There it is, He thought happily. My excited heartbeat when he looks at me like this. Ah~ I’ve missed it.
And then, out of a sudden desire, Tegoshi reached out his free hand and shove it into Yamapi’s one, who looked at him with tiny surprise.
But then he smiled his warm smile and intertwined there fingers. They ate their cotton candy in silence. There was no need to say a thing.
[KYAAAAAAAAAAAA! -°w°-]

Von:  Jani-chan
2010-07-11T19:55:54+00:00 11.07.2010 21:55
Owww, baka Pi, poor Tego. He was doing so well and than he messed up the worst way possible in that situation. *sigh*

May I ask how old they are in that story? Just curious...


Von:  Jani-chan
2010-07-11T19:39:32+00:00 11.07.2010 21:39
So, break of studying! Time to continue reading again.

"Five Minutes!” Staff-san shouted and left. Tegoshi looked around. Massu stuffed a last cookie into his mouth, Koyama was teased a last time by Shige, Ryo smiled happily and Yamapi seemed still very relaxed. It was the usual chaos which broke out just when Tegoshi wanted to say how much he loved this bunch of guys. Massu chocked an a crumb and as he wanted to get a glass of water he ran over Shige, who fell on Koyama, who bumped into the table of food. A lot of apples, rice and other snacks flew around the dressing-room and a piece of banana landed with a ‘plop’ in Yamapi’s cup of coffee and spilled some drops onto his nose. When Tegoshi wanted to help Shige and Koyama he tripped over his own feed, lost his balance and with a tiny squeal he closed his eyes, prepared for the thud. But right the moment he thought he would hit the ground he felt an arm wrapping around his waist, swirling him up and pressing him against a warm chest. [CHAOS!!! YAY! And TegoPi. YAY! What else do you want.^^ ]

“Oy~” he heard Yamapi’s voice mixed with a suppressed smile. “Take care. We’re in a messy mood again here, ne~” Tegoshi opened his eyes. He laid in a strong pair of arms, which held him safely. Yamapi was watching his face closely and smiled gently at Tegoshi’s innocently blushed face. “Surprised?” Yamapi asked teasingly and adored Tegoshi’s expression. Their eyes met and time stood still. Tegoshi heard his heartbeat and felt Yamapi’s soft breath on his face. He had butterflies in his tummy when he realized that Yamapi really hold him in his arms, and that it was really Yamapi, who smiled at him with those gentle eyes of a dog and a drop of coffee at his nose. [AWWWWWWWWWWWW!]

Tegoshi first looked at Yamapi in the mirror, then turned around, suddenly missing the tiny weight of his hands on his shoulders, and faced him. Yamapi smiled at him, but his eyes were serious behind the always gentle sparkle. “Sure you can.” Tegoshi said, the head in the neck, because they stood so close. He felt so tiny next to Yamapi’s strong, protecting stature.
“Now?” Tegoshi asked, but Yamapi shook his head. “Later. I wanna talk when….erm…alone, you know?”
Tegoshi’s heartbeat fastened. Yamapi looked unsure in a cute way as he rubbed his nose. “Just when it’s okay for you.”
[And more TegoPi. YAY!]

“Today was super fun, ne~ Though I messed up the lyrics.” He smirked in embarrassment.
“The girls liked it.” Tegoshi laughed. “And I liked it too~”
“Hehe, maybe I should mess up more then.”
“Yeah, do so and I will fangirl you as well.”
“Really?”
Tegoshi watched Yamapi’s face. Was there really a glance of hop in it? He couldn’t help but put on a wide grin. “Really(.)[Komma]” He said honestly, surprised by the fact he really admitted it.
Yamapi smiled brightly. “I will do my best then.”
[KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! So cute! I wanna see that!]

Was there really a glance of hop in it? [War es wirklich ein hopfenvoller Blick??? sorry, guess it's too hot^.^°]

He did enjoy out conversation as well…didn’t he? [our]

Uhhhh, elevator scene....dame! dame, dame, dame!
Von:  Jani-chan
2010-06-13T21:30:04+00:00 13.06.2010 23:30
Hm...on the one side (from the suspense aspect) it's really good that he didn't had to tell him, but from the point of an reader and a TegoPi fan that's...blöd.

“Koyama!” Manager-San said with his deep impressing voice and Koyama shut up immediately. “One word further and you’ll go on stage in a pink Tutu today!”

Everybody laughed at Koyama’s shocked expression and Shige put on an evil smirk. “Are you imagining him in tights and short mini-tutu?” Ryo asked in a whispering voice, which made Shige first twitch and then blush into a deep red-tone.
(Hehehe. I just say "well mannered imagination" *ggg* do you know engrish.com? It's an facinating page with pictures from all the stuff collected with wrong english in Asia. Some of them are quite disturbing...)

“Oy, Tesshi, what’s wrong?” Koyama asked full of member ai and laid his hand worrying onto Tegoshi’s skinny arm. “You seem pretty down…”
“Nothin in particular. My stomach feels a bit unwell due to the flight.”
“But you love flying.”
“I guess I’m getting old then.” Tegoshi smiled and both Yamapi and Koyama lifted and eyebrow. “If you are getting old, what the heck are we then? Dead Dinosaurs?”
(Muha. Poor Tego, getting old. Well, can you imagine them all as old men? I hardly can...)

Tegoshi couldn’t help but laughing. It was a load off Yamapi’s mind when he heard the cheering bursting sound and saw Tegoshi’s baby-cheeks blushing. “Ah~” he sighed in happy relief. “This is the Tesshi I so love.” He said and poked Tegoshi’s snub nose. Tegoshi blushed even more as he realized Yamapi’s words. He said he loves me in some kind of meaning!! He thought in excitement.
(AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, KYAAAAAAAAAAA! So damn cute...)

Massu didn’t look that happy anymore, but after Yamapi, Tegoshi, Koyama and Shige agreed to Ryo’s idea he gave in. “Have no other choice then…” he murmured and Tegoshi patted his back with a cheerful smile. “You’re very strong, Massu. I’m proud of you.” He said honestly and full of innocence.
(Ganbare, Massu! Fighto oh! XD)

He wanted to doff his hoody, but simply couldn’t pull it off his head. “Shit…” he mumbled as he tore and yanked. He heard an amused giggle, some steps and then felt someone grabbing his hoody. “Come on. Arms up.” Ryo said gently, Tegoshi did as he was told and Ryo took the hoody off his head like a toddler. “See, it’s easy like this.” Ryo teased and gave Tegoshi his hoody, who had deep red cheeks. Ryo let out a husky laugh. “No need to be embarrassed. It’s okay.” And he tousled through Tegoshi’s hair, turned him into the direction where the bathroom was and gave him a little shove. “Go.” Ryo said with a caring smile in his voice. Tegoshi looked back at him as he walked to the bathroom with a pout He nearly ran into the doorframe and Ryo couldn’t help but laughing. Tegoshi blushed a bit, but then shrugged it off with a shyly, cute smile.
(hm...well yeah, it's also cute the way you write it and yes, they look also good together, especially when Tego is helplessly trapped in his own clothes...however... I'm sure Pi would have done a good job as well... ^.-)

It has become a kind of long comment due to the textexamples... gomene^^°


Von:  Jani-chan
2010-06-13T20:31:43+00:00 13.06.2010 22:31
Ryo sighed, then he cleared his throat: “Do you need some time?”
“Think so.”
“Shall I really go ahead?”
“Yes, please.”
“Are you okay?” Ryo asked again and this time Tegoshi answered. “I hope so.”
This wasn’t the thing Ryo hoped for either. “If you need something I’ll be there, ne…Though I’m probabl the person you want to be there for you the least.” Then he turned around and wanted to leave, but the sound of a door clicking made him stop. He whirled around to see if Tegoshi would come out after all, but the door was just opened a little crack. “Don’t get me wrong” Tegoshi’s voice was nearly a whisper. “I don’t hate you or something like that. And I won’t avoid you. I just need a moment for me to get over it, okay?” Ryo nodded till he realized that Tegoshi couldn’t see it. “Yes, I understand.”
“Thanks…”
(Awwwww, poor Tego! T.T BAKA Ryo, who would say something that important in such a situation? Did he take something that coursed his brain to be offline? Or maybe Tego was right and it wasn't to early to think properly...Well, it's said and can't be undone as he noticed himself. Idiot.)

I’m Pi-chan or you. Did you forget?”
(You or me? I'm not quite sure. Maybe we are both a little bit pi-chan: you pi, me chan, or reverse? ^^ Gomene. Just a little irritating at the first moment...)

“Don’t get me wrong. I won’t mean it in a bad way.”
“It’s okay. You have your reason. Everyone has.”
“Maah~” Tegoshi let out a whiny whim. “You’re always so understanding and nice.”
“Sounds full of reproach…” Yamapi said with a little pout.
(MOOOOOUU, so cute. =3 Even if I know the end already I still think they would be such a cute couple...*sigh*)

“If I would know that I wouldn’t be so confused. It somehow – well, I think it’s the wrong word, but it makes me happy.” Yamapi stopped breathing. “But on the other hand…I already have one I love…”
Yamapi couldn’t help but gasping. “You do?” he asked with a deep shock in his voice. He already thought that Ryo was a hard concurrent. But another one? He felt panic slowly rising up within him.
“I do…” Tegoshi blushed, half of his face hidden by his fluffy soft hair.
Yamapi feared the question, but he had to ask though: “Who?”
(hehe. Poor Yamapi. If he only knew...When I first read it i hoped so much that it would be him Tego was talking about. Well, I was very happy to find out the truth ^.^ And by the way I like that Cliffhanger. Very cool one. *thumbs up* Drives readers mad, if they can't continue with the next chapter. *gg*)
Von:  Jani-chan
2010-06-13T19:57:42+00:00 13.06.2010 21:57
During the encore everybody did things as he wanted, which ended up with half-naked KoyaPi, wet Shige, Ryo piggy-backing Tegoshi again, everybody singing the song-parts as he wished and Massu wearing all the shirts and clothes Koyama and Yamapi dressed off. The stage was a huge mess and Shige bumped more than once into a Jr. and Tegoshi and Ryo whacked him for not paying attention to his Kouhai’s everytime they passed him.
(AWWWWWWWWWWWW, Chaos....*ggg*)

“Oy, sleepy baby~”
“Let me sleep…”
“I don’t even think about that.”
“Mpfh…”
“Tesshi~ Come on, wake up!”
“Don’t wanna…Let go of my blanket.”
Ryo chuckled. Tegoshi dug his head further into his big fluffy pillow, hoping Ryo would be silent. “Too early…” he claimed and tried to pull his blanket out of Ryo’s hand, because his shoulders froze. “That’s unfair~ I’m still so tired, Ryo-chan…”
(hehe, so kawaii ^.^)

Von:  Jani-chan
2010-06-06T19:55:59+00:00 06.06.2010 21:55
Yay! New chapter! ^^

But now he felt like that had somehow changed. Somehow he got the thought that Yamapi and Ryo were fighting over something that conquered him. It was a stupid thought, he knew that. He would never be so important to be the reason for a fight between such good friends like RyoPi. But of course he saw every now and then how they narrowed their eyes whenever the other one was near to him. He worried about what he could have done to raise up such a hassle between them.
(Awwww, poor innocent Tego. Does it just seem this way or has he really a low self-confidence in that scene?)

“I am SO looking forward to the concert!” he shouted as everyone went to the dressing room and impetuously he hugged Koyama from the back. “I’m glad to sing with you on stage again~”
“I think everyone is, ne~” Shige said and pulled Tegoshi off from his Koyama, who smiled happily. “Member Ai~~” He raved about this scene. “Minna DAISUKI!” Massu, Ryo, Yamapi and Shige blushed, but Tegoshi threw his arms up in the air and yelled: “I love you too!”
“Do you love me too?” Ryo asked and Tegoshi nodded. “Mh, of course!”
“Me too?” Pi wanted to now, a slight too-serious look on his face. Tegoshi nodded again. “Mh. And I love Shige too. And my Massu. Chuchuu~” He rubbed Massu’s chubby cheeks and both laughed.
(KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, I just love this scene. It's soooooooo cute. *sigh*)

Thanks for uploading! ^^

Cu
lG Jani-chan

*hands cookies over to you*
Von:  Jani-chan
2010-06-05T16:42:23+00:00 05.06.2010 18:42
He looked up as Tegoshi entered the room with his shiny I-am-the-cutest-boy-in-the-world-smile. (Awwwww!)

Tegoshi looked at the bed in front of him. Silently he knelt down so his eyes were on line with were Yamapi’s face was hidden under one of the tons of blankets. He listened to the steady, calm and regular breath. It was a wonderful, pleasant sound. He could’ve listened to it forever. But just in this moment Yamapi moved and his head came out of the blankets. He smacked and placed his face on a pillow near the edge of the bed. He still was sound asleep, dreaming like a baby. He looked so peaceful Tegoshi wanted to marvel at his face for hours.
(AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! So cute! I love their sleeping faces. *sleeping-face-picture-Collector desu*

“You can’t be mad at me.” Tegoshi still had his dorky smile from one ear to the other. And he was darn right. Yamapi wasn’t the one who got angry at other people easily anyway, but as he saw little Tegoshi in front oh him, he nearly melted. He couldn’t stop himself from cupping Tegoshi’s face between his hands. It seemed so teeny-tiny next to his own, big fingers. Gently he stroke Tegoshi’s slightly chubby cheeks.
“Pi-chan…”
“Sssht…Just a second.”
Tegoshi didn’t move, blushing around his nose. His heartbeat was so fast he feared it would suddenly stop due to strain. With widely opened eyes he stared into Yamapi’s serious face. He nearly lost in his deep, dark eyes.
(KYAAAAAAA!so unbelieveable cute! The whole scene, but... MEEEEEP! *totally excited*)

It was that very moment when Tegoshi finally decided to tell what he feels, when Koyama, Shige, Massu and Ryo bumped into the hotel-room. Like hardened criminals the two of them twitched and drove away from each other.
(DAME! DAME! Everything would have turned out fine, if they wouldn't had... T.T)

So Tego is a sheep, ryo is a cowbear and Pi is a gnome...("like", I know, but...well, however...) Please upload soon. And could you write me an ens, when you upload at LJ? Would be great. I can't wait to know, who'll be it...

Thanks for writing this wonderful story and if you don't mind, release your new works at animexx too, I know the readers here are a ungrateful bunch and the Freischalter are sometimes really annoying, but nevertheless there are a few who would like to read it and comment.

I'm looking forward to hear from you soon

lG Jani-chan