Through the Lack of Clarity

Ehhr just one more thing to add. I really, really like the title, it gets you to think what else could stand behind it, which makes the reader remind it.

Yeah I know you must think "what the fuck's wrong with that guy complaining 'bout everything I wrote", but I really just wanna help.
Lifes in line 2 must be spelled with an "f" except for an "v"
Also you should say "What should I do to get a kiss" or "to be kissed"
The last thing is that you should write everything I have and not all I have.

But behind these lines lie feelings that I'm just too fucking familiar with. You really catched them.

das gedicht bringt einen wirklich zum nachdenken!

hört sich nach sehr viel schmerz und leid an ...
hat dir jemand in dieser zeit weh getan?