Fanart: Gohan macht ein Chidori
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| LauraNeatO [Zeichner-Galerie] | Upload: 15.04.2006 08:30 |
| Gohan mit ein Chidori (aus Kakashi in Naruto). I changed my original text (in Englisch) to Deutsch, so you all can understand : ) | Themen: Dragonball Stile: Computer Grafik Charaktere: Son-Gohan |
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Kommentare (9)
gohan with chidori
really cool
that's a great idea^^
really cool
that's a great idea^^
Von: abgemeldet
21.05.2008 17:22
woaahhhhh!!!
that's....wooooooooaaaahhhhhh!!
it looks like........damn!!!!
that's....wooooooooaaaahhhhhh!!
it looks like........damn!!!!
hahahahah WOW Gohnan with Chidori!!!XDDD lol
Von: abgemeldet
22.04.2007 19:52
Even though it has been a very long time since the last one added a comment, I can't hold back myself to give you a feedback.
I agree with waffles. It's very formal and it would be better if you write: "Ganz richtig, Boo Versuch nur dem auszuweichen."
But even if you don't correct the sentence it should be "Versuch nur deM auszuweichen" because it sounds as if there are more than just one but then you wouldn't say "deN". In this case (if there are more than just one) "diesen" would be correct and it would also sound much better. ;)
Except for this, "Ganz richtig, Buu..." isn't wrong but normally you would say "Ganz recht, Buu...".
And in your description it should be "einem Shidori".
Apart from these facts I have to say something about your drawing.
I think, you are a very good drawer and I haven't anything to criticize. Maybe he looks a bit more excited than angry because of his mouth being pulled up instead of being pulled down.
I think for you it's impossible to make big mistakes ^____^
I admire your skills!
I agree with waffles. It's very formal and it would be better if you write: "Ganz richtig, Boo Versuch nur dem auszuweichen."
But even if you don't correct the sentence it should be "Versuch nur deM auszuweichen" because it sounds as if there are more than just one but then you wouldn't say "deN". In this case (if there are more than just one) "diesen" would be correct and it would also sound much better. ;)
Except for this, "Ganz richtig, Buu..." isn't wrong but normally you would say "Ganz recht, Buu...".
And in your description it should be "einem Shidori".
Apart from these facts I have to say something about your drawing.
I think, you are a very good drawer and I haven't anything to criticize. Maybe he looks a bit more excited than angry because of his mouth being pulled up instead of being pulled down.
I think for you it's impossible to make big mistakes ^____^
I admire your skills!
i think i dont have to tall that youve got talent, hu? but the text would be better like "[...]Versuch nur, dem auszuweichen!" "Sie" is veeeery formal and normally you use this to adress someone like a teacher, your boss or just someone you dont know. i suppose gohan doesnt have THAT much respect for boo...:)
Von: abgemeldet
17.04.2006 21:05
Nice idea! ^_^ The pic is fab, though I think it would've been much better if it wasn't just in black 'n white ^___^
Anyway, keep up the good work!^^
Anyway, keep up the good work!^^
hey! that's a cool idea!
it's cool!
it's cool!
hello ^^..it is so cool *__*
Von: abgemeldet
15.04.2006 09:46
Wow .. it looks cool ^^
