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Another one of these stupid poems.........i can't do anything against it, but right in the moment i seem to have the inner wish to right everything in this kind of way......all my thoughts find their way out of my head in this way on the paper.....
 

Tears
 

Warning: sad......

Disclaimer: it doesn't deal with a special person

Remarks of the author: i should not have download the soundtrack of the Kenshin OVA....then this would not be inspired by one of the musictitles of the Kenshin OVA
 

Tears.........

Running down a cheek...

Leaking over the edge of a chin....

Slowly dripping along a neck......

Wet, warm, salty, with out end........
 

Lulled in by darkness,

softly touched by the frozen winds,

covered by the cold,

cut of from reality

crawled up in the night,

hit deeper than death,

nothing left to cry for,

gone, all gone,

the remains scarcely shattered over the ground

still imagining to feeling the weight,

the touch,

to hear the sound of breaths,

the almost loudless voice,

The shadow of a person,

a empty body left,

the soul drifting away slowly,

the shape losing on realness,

by now seem to exist of dust, fog, dreams
 

Tears....

Bringing out the pain of an heart......

Ripped a part......

Of a soul shattered.............

in to millions of peaces....
 

/....gone.........................forever left.......................alone.....................on my own........................in total loneliness.........he promised not to leaf without me.......not to leaf me alone..........to stay with me...........but he left........................../



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Von:  hideto
2004-02-03T07:43:54+00:00 03.02.2004 08:43
ano...so einsam...
Von: abgemeldet
2002-12-26T15:56:20+00:00 26.12.2002 16:56
once again very depressing, writing a poem about death is very hard...I mean hard to make it sound lyrical... good discription about body and soul seperating...

the only thing...ehm..loudless?? soundless'd be the right word ^_~ ...and also it's leave...leafs are the green things that grow on trees XD

~s.A.v~
Von:  cu123
2002-12-20T06:58:10+00:00 20.12.2002 07:58
Ist das traurig *schnief* Auch wenn ich Kenshin nicht kenne (außer halt als Mangatitel ^^°) finde ich dieses Gedicht echt toll ^^ *mal wieder nicht weiß was du hast* Was ist daran ,stupid'????? *dir ganz und gar nicht zustimmen kann* Besonders gut hat mir die Stelle gefallen, wo du beschreibst, wie die Seele dahinschwindet ^^ Auch wenn ich sonst solchen Depri-Sachen nicht allzu viel abgewinnen kann... ^^y
Sag mir Bescheid, wenn du mal wieder was on stellst ^^ *lieb guck*
Bye, cu ^-^
Von: abgemeldet
2002-12-15T16:20:06+00:00 15.12.2002 17:20
hey das ist ja richtig cool ;)


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