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Betrayed - vol. 2

original story by Carl Taylor
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2332 Wörter, 3 Kapitel
Thomas is a 15-year-old boy, who started half a year ago at his new all-boys boarding school somewhere in Great Britain. He’s a silent and shy person, whose most important person is his in Switzerland living mother. Thus he’s feeling all alone and is quite thankful, when his English teacher Mr. Clay offers support. One person Thomas detests the most is the 18-years-old pupil Stewart Bredley, who’s called Brad by everyone, and who teases and threaten him always. One day he uses all his braveness and tells Mr. Clay about the drug-affair Brad’s in, but the boy couldn’t be caught in the act. Thus he stays in school, but the school is in big financial problems, therefore the headmaster has to fire the 2 newest teachers: Mr. Clay and Mr. Hansen – the German teacher. Only the teachers know about that incident so far. They’ll leave the school at the end of this year...

The ff is in english because of the original text, which is also english! The original is a novel by Carl Taylor and contains sooo many nice ;) hints that I had to write a ff to it. RavenInAGoldenCage showed the book to me and we discussed it from the beginning till the end - I read it out loudly and we laughed and "caughed" a lot *g* well, I hope some of you might know the novel, because it's an english-lesson-novel

hope you like it, although it's english - and if you see any mistakes in grammar etc. don't hesitate to write me an ENS - because I always wanna improve my language ;) (I'm just a normal german)

Ta Moè

I will upload illustrations to the first 12 chapters later ;) - as well as a cover, when I've got some time

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  • Hansen

    age: 32
    hair-colour: dark blond
    teaches: German

    He's the German teacher and school for already 2 years. He became friends with Clay immedatly.
  • John Clay

    age: 28
    hair-colour: blond
    teaches: English

    He's the newest teacher at the school and wanted to start a new system there, a system of respect as well as friendship. He cares very much for Thomas and promised his mother he would look after him. He also promised Thomas he would protect him against Brad, because he told the teacher about the drug-incident, but Clay couldn't keep it.
  • Charakter
    Ralph

    age: 15
    hair-colour: reddish brown
    roommate of: Thomas

    He's Thomas' roommate and thinks of him as a friend.
  • Charakter
    Stewart Bredley

    age: 18
    hair-colour: blond
    nick: Brad
    best friend: Dexter

    He's a selfconfident, athletic and tall boy, who's a bit cruel and everybody listens to what he says - he dealed with drugs but wasn't caught in the act. Thus he is still at the school.
  • Charakter
    Thomas Walker

    age: 15
    hair-colour: brown
    roommate of: Ralph

    He's shy and loves his mother. His parents are divorced and his father is thus travelling around.
    Mr. Clay is the person he trusts most at the school.
    Mr. Clay promised Thomas he would protect him against Brad, because he told the teacher about the drug-incident.
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Von:  GoldenCageCosplay
2007-12-20T21:43:15+00:00 20.12.2007 22:43
Yeah, you´ve done it, you´ve upload the FF. I´m writting the first part, but it isn´t finish by now. I hope Brad isn´t too rude to Thomas. BUT I hope YOU aren´t too rude to him, too. The 12th Chapter is the best by far. I wasn´t the only one who founded strage. Some boys of my class have noticed this curious scene, too.
Betrayed is really a good book to misunderstand figures. Because the author hasn´t written the cogitations.
I´m really agog to read the end. I have no idea, how it could end. Hope you know it... =)
Sorry, for all these mistakes and the short text.

Yours, RaVEn