A christmas story - endlich!!
Erstellt: 08.01.2006
Letzte Änderung: 11.01.2006
Letzte Änderung: 11.01.2006
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Englisch
14787 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
14787 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Weihnachten, Harry Potter
Hauptcharaktere: Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy
Unterthemen: Harrys Ära
Draco comes back from a midnight adventure, when suddenly a portriat hits him in the back. A displeasing encounter which will have consequences
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 Adult | E: 08.01.2006 U: 11.01.2006 |
Kommentare (2) 14786 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Now ... after thinking a long time about what to write in this comment I finally decided to think about that while I write ... XD
First of all ... I couldn't stop reading because the story was so interesting ... no .. not (only) because of the sexscenes ... in my eyes your story is built up very logically ... I never thought 'Why the hell does he do that?' or something similar ... both thumbs up for that!
Furthermore it was a very good descision of yours to write out of Dracos point of view ... I always wanted to know what he could think or feel ... and he's one of my favourite characters ... !
By the way ... I just loved the part outside the snowy castle on christmas eve ... !
In my opinion a very well written story!!!
mizuchi ^-^
P.s.: If there's anything wrongly written in this comment ... I don't care as long as you understnad, what I wanted to say ... but if there should be something that's not clear to you don't care to ask ... because english is not my mothertongue ... so ... it's more than possible that you don't understand what I wanted to say ...
mizu ^-^
First of all ... I couldn't stop reading because the story was so interesting ... no .. not (only) because of the sexscenes ... in my eyes your story is built up very logically ... I never thought 'Why the hell does he do that?' or something similar ... both thumbs up for that!
Furthermore it was a very good descision of yours to write out of Dracos point of view ... I always wanted to know what he could think or feel ... and he's one of my favourite characters ... !
By the way ... I just loved the part outside the snowy castle on christmas eve ... !
In my opinion a very well written story!!!
mizuchi ^-^
P.s.: If there's anything wrongly written in this comment ... I don't care as long as you understnad, what I wanted to say ... but if there should be something that's not clear to you don't care to ask ... because english is not my mothertongue ... so ... it's more than possible that you don't understand what I wanted to say ...
mizu ^-^
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1:
Wow this story is really sweet, your talent for writting is amazing!!! I hope you write mor fanfics with this characters! And please if you do it, can you write draco as bottom, i think it suits him more!!! ;D
Marry Christmas
Marry Christmas
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