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A christmas story - endlich!!

ob es wohl diesmal klappt?
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Letzte Änderung: 11.01.2006
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Englisch
14787 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Hauptcharaktere: Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy
Unterthemen: Harrys Ära
Draco comes back from a midnight adventure, when suddenly a portriat hits him in the back. A displeasing encounter which will have consequences

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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 Adult E: 08.01.2006
U: 11.01.2006
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Bitte keine Beleidigungen oder Flames! Falls Ihr Kritik habt, formuliert sie bitte konstruktiv.
Von:  mizuchi_akkaku
2007-04-09T10:27:28+00:00 09.04.2007 12:27
Now ... after thinking a long time about what to write in this comment I finally decided to think about that while I write ... XD
First of all ... I couldn't stop reading because the story was so interesting ... no .. not (only) because of the sexscenes ... in my eyes your story is built up very logically ... I never thought 'Why the hell does he do that?' or something similar ... both thumbs up for that!
Furthermore it was a very good descision of yours to write out of Dracos point of view ... I always wanted to know what he could think or feel ... and he's one of my favourite characters ... !
By the way ... I just loved the part outside the snowy castle on christmas eve ... !
In my opinion a very well written story!!!

mizuchi ^-^

P.s.: If there's anything wrongly written in this comment ... I don't care as long as you understnad, what I wanted to say ... but if there should be something that's not clear to you don't care to ask ... because english is not my mothertongue ... so ... it's more than possible that you don't understand what I wanted to say ...

mizu ^-^
Von:  klen24
2006-12-26T22:46:40+00:00 26.12.2006 23:46
Wow this story is really sweet, your talent for writting is amazing!!! I hope you write mor fanfics with this characters! And please if you do it, can you write draco as bottom, i think it suits him more!!! ;D
Marry Christmas